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RHPS Calendar - WIP by LilyBayer RHPS Calendar - WIP by LilyBayer
The project I'm working on in my Layout and Design class. I've got the general formatting done for the majority of the calendar, top boxes tentative, and only putting in pictures and quotes to go!

:w00t:

Seriously, any suggestions for the top boxes would be appreciated. Originally, they were the lighter gray that's in the "month" box at the top, but I didn't want to leave them plain. This isn't much better. xD

Other suggestions are also welcome.

:highfive:
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:iconkogarashi-ookami:
Kogarashi-Ookami Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
That looks pretty amazing although you may need to fade the lips a little more. They're drawing attention away from the lettering....mmm lips XD
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LilyBayer Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
I've secretly faded both the box and the lips. xD Do you think it'd be better to fade some more, or up the opacity of the box?

And thank you! :glomp:
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:iconkogarashi-ookami:
Kogarashi-Ookami Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
if you already faded it I wouldn't worry @.@ XD
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:iconlilybayer:
LilyBayer Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Well it's obviously still adjustable. xD Do you think that I should make the background of the numbering more solid, or that it's good as is?
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:iconkogarashi-ookami:
Kogarashi-Ookami Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
If you could adjust the tone a tid bit darker that'd be good!
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LilyBayer Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student General Artist
I'll have to upload a screenshot of my corrections. I actually changed the size of the numbers, and the red isn't quite as hard on the eyes. I also did up the opacity on the gray.
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:iconkogarashi-ookami:
Kogarashi-Ookami Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
I wanna see!
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:iconlilybayer:
LilyBayer Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Then see you shall! You just reminded me to post a screenshot. Feedback would be :heart:!
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